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I drift upon the misted riverlost in the silence of the caverns of my souluntil there it is - A jewel of such beauty that it hurts my heart to breathe.I step into it and all at once I am away,into the...
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Quote:Seeing all that is beautifuland much that is strange,Yet it all makes a crazy kind of sense.Those particular lines sound like my life.. lol.A wonderful write, Aly.......nice dreams are always...
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Quote:Where the silver luminescenceonce blanketed my core,now I bathe in the sunlit iridescenceof my yearning soul.Oh yes, Riv! I hate waking up from these type of dreams, your words literally...
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Quote:Where the silver luminescenceonce blanketed my core,now I bathe in the sunlit iridescenceof my yearning soul.Seeing all that is beautifuland much that is strange,Yet it all makes a crazy kind of...
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(((((~Riv~)))))I have to quote the entire spill, as there are so many layers of emotions that touch in understanding places within my own heart so softly interwoven into each inkdrop of...
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Quote:But once there I smile,for upon my face are the scars of sleep,a soft reminder of what was. I know I say this so often, but it's the truth, the closing of a poem is sooooooooooo important for...
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Now this was a very sweet dream you took us on, dear poetess!!Grandly written at that!
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AlylonnaStunning poem. The intro and closing are simply beautiful. The breaking of the dawn is beautiful, but sadly also interrupts many wonderful dreams.FairEllen
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i enjoyed this share from start to finish!Quote:But once there I smile,for upon my face are the scars of sleep,a soft reminder of what was. to end with a smile and the only goodscar to have made me...
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I'm gettin' some of them scars myself, thank God :) I've been having some really vivid dreams lately too. I had a dream the other night that instead of delivering flowers, etc. to the patients at the...
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**Riv**This was totally outstanding!! You took me right there with you through your fabulous story telling... I could quote the whole thing! I am totally impressed!Loved it! ~Cho...
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Awww thankyou so much everyone. As always you are far too generous with your praise!!! I'm glad you all enjoyed reading it.It was kind of funny how it came about - I had this amazing dream the other...
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Thankyou so much for the award Cho!! I didn't see it earlier - must have been having an idiot moment lol.guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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it is nice, those days, when the remembrance gifts the smile..........enjoyed..........
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